Flash Fiction Starter Complete

Here's my response to the flash fiction starter sentence project. I actually had something longer planned in the beginning, but I felt this ending was appropriate.

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=d4ddkvc_6fw67t474
I'm not sure if the last sentence really "jives" with the rest of the work, but it's supposed to be short, light, and wistful :)
Tell me what you think.